Friday, 2 December 2016

Unit 01 feedback

Elicia,

As I have said before, you are really impressing me this year, not only do you work really hard but you give everything a try even when you are not confident in its use - just look at how far you have come with Photoshop!

To do:

  • Summarise mood board
  • add feedback sheet
  • rotate the flow chart to horizontal
  • Add more detail and illustrations to the learner diary



Below are some small final changes:

  • Learner Diary - little more detail needed here, e.g., how does a brief, client and audience and branding impact your work? why did we look at them?
  • Audience and Branding (analysis of EN homepage) - any more you could say? What about the pictures used - what do they say about the students who go here?
  • Mood board - check your spelling of board (you have bored in the text)
  • Proposal - add a little more about exact fonts (font, size, style) and colours (exact hex codes)
  • Amended website designs (based on feedback) and summary of whether the changes are beneficial (with justifications) - make the social media logos a little smaller and change the white text (difficult to read against light background).


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